Writing
In 4th Grade our focus is writing. Our county has issued a rubric that is used when scoring your child's monthly writing prompts.  Below you will find the rubric we must use for grades k-5.
*Please visit the Family Resources Page for helpful links with Writing.

*Please scroll down to the bottom of the rubric for information regarding the "Writing Traits" that your child is being taught.

6 Point Writing Rubric Grades K-6
1
BEGINNING WRITER
2
EARLY WRITER
3 DEVELOPING WRITER
4 PROFICIENT WRITER

5

FLUENT WRITER

6

MATURE WRITER

Focus
IS THE PAPER CLEAR AND MAINTAINED?
  • Minimally addresses the topic
  • Unrelated information my be included
  • Slightly related to the topic
  • Generally focused on the topic, may contain some unrelated ideas
  • May lack a sense of completeness or wholeness
  • Generally focused on the topic, may contain some extraneous information
  • Seems complete or whole
  • Focus on the topic
  • Demonstrates a sense of completeness or wholeness
  • Focus on the topic
  • Demonstrates a sense of completeness or wholeness
ORGANIZATION
IS THERE A LOGICAL FLOW OF IDEA? WHAT IS THE ORGANIZATIONAL PATTERN?
  • Does not exhibit an organizational pattern
  • Few, if any, transitional devices
  • Little evidence of an organizational pattern or use of transitional devices
  • Organizational pattern attempted
  • Some transitional devices
  • Lapses may occur
  • Organizational pattern attempted
  • Lapses may occur
  • Transitional devices included
  • Organizational pattern attempted
  • Lapses may occur
  • Transitional devices included
  • Logical flow of ideas
  • Includes transitional devices
SUPPORT
DOES THE SUPPORT REVEAL THE FOCUS?
  • Little if any development of supporting ideas
  • Lists, cliches, limited or immature word choice.
  • Development of supporting ideas inadequate or illogical
  • Word choice is limited or immature
  • Some supporting ideas or examples may not be developed
  • Word choice generally adequate
  • Some supporting ideas contain specifics and details; some ideas may not be developed
  • Word choice is generally adequate
  • Adequate supporting ideas or examples
  • Word choice adequate by may lack precision
  • Ample supporting ideas or examples
  • Precision word choice
  • Mature command of language
CONVENTIONS
DO THE CONVENTIONS IMPEDE UNDERSTANDING?
 
  • Frequent errors in conventions
  • Simple sentence convention
  • Sentence structure may impede communication
  • Frequent errors in basic punctuation and capitalization demonstrated
  • Commonly used words usually spelled correctly
  • Attempt to use a variety of sentence structures; most or simple constructions
  • Knowledge of basic conventions are demonstrated
  • Commonly used words are usually spelled correctly
  • Attempt to use a variety of sentence structures
  • Knowledge of basic conventions are demonstrated
  • Commonly used words are usually spelled correctly
  • Attempt to use a variety of sentence structures
  • Occassional errors in s/v agreement; but doesn't impede communication
  • Most sentences are complete but few fragments may exist
  • Conventions generally followed
  • Various sentence structure
  • S/v agreement are generally correct
  • Sentences almost always complete unless fragrments are purposeful
  • Various sentence structure
  • Conventions generally followed


                                                               Writing Traits:
                                                       What is a Writing Trait?
Writing Traits is not a new curriculum, in fact you probably are already teaching the traits. Writing Traits are the qualities that the teachers look for in good writing. In fact many of the writing skills that are used are the same skills that good readers use. This allows for easy integration between the reading and writing instruction. One of the great things about the writing traits is that it uses a common writing language that is used through out the grade levels.
Writing Trait
What You are Teaching
Ideas 
Main idea message, or clarity, detail.
Organization
How to begin, how to end, a sense of order, sequencing, how to link ideas together.
Voice

Putting energy into writing, recognizing voice, selecting personally important topics, connecting to an audience.

 
Word Choice
Being choosy about words, identifying favorite words, using strong verbs, knowing a verb from a noun or adjective.
Sentence Fluency

Sentence sense what is a sentence?, an ear for variety, different sentence patterns.

 
Conventions/Layout

A proofreader's eye and ear, awareness of conventions, sense of self as editor.

 

 

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